Looked professional. Better than most real estate videos I've seen. (I just bought twelve acres in Washington state, and have purchased half dozen rental units in Oklahoma).
But we're not helping anyone by just back-slapping. So let's get down and dirty -
- 0:13: talent cut at knees; apex of roof cut off; wind noise
- I like the slow door opening & smooth, slow pans
- kitchen looks a bit dark. Better lighting would help.
- I think some non-panning, non-tilting scenes intersperced could have helped. Almost needed drammamine
- Some scenes, like the last bedroom one, may have been better if not on auto-exposure. Maybe let window blow out a little to keep room exposed better.
- Like some of the other rooms, basement could have been lit better. Seemed too dark, gloomy.
- Same with hallway scene at 3:20
- Theatre scene could have been lit until screen image projected, then darkened for screen.
By cutting the talent at the thigh or waist, you could have included the roof apex. (Never cut at knees; ankles; between knees & ankles; base of neck)
By using a lav mic with fur muff, you'd reduce wind noise two ways -
1] lav puts mic closer to sound source, making prime source stand out better than background.
2] fur cuts wind noise dramatically.
If wind noise was still an issue, you probably could have removed most the remaining noise in post because having mic close to lips makes voice substantial enough to separate from background better than with shotgun.
I think an on-cam light and a couple of flourescents on stands could have helped some of those room shots immensely.
This is mostly nit-picking. Your basics seem sound. You'll get better.
