I studiously did not read the earlier comments so that they would not affect mine..
* That very first dissolve, allows the lower video track to show through before dissolving to the next clip. The PP built-in composite is either not dissolving at the same point with the clip or is allowing its lower clip to show through regardless. To fix this, you could render a separate avi of just this clip and overlay - make it a second or so longer than you'll need so you'll have the handles for the dissolve. Then the clip will dissolve to the next instead of allowing the image beneath to show through.
* Those vows were nice and clear - good work!
* Several clips just had way too much headroom. Work on framing; rule of thirds; etc.
* Not enough close-ups.
* Yeah, too much shaky video. Notice how some clips are shakier at the begining, end or both? This happens to all of us. Here's a quick fix - buy a tripod :lol: - no, really here's a quick fix: cut off the shakier ends, then use your rate-stretch tool to slow the speed so that the clip still covers what you need. In fact, you may decide to cut out half the clip or so for a nice slo-mo effect that will smooth out the rest of the clip as well.
* Multiple cameras - even a wide static cam, would have given you different angles to cut to and made it a more interesting video.
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Rain? Did it rain? Were you shooting outdoors in the rain? Tell me you've got rain covers for your cameras! Good for you! (But if you don't, better get some).